This was well written and so much better than I thought. I’m still getting used to age play. But I feel like Renee Rose had a true understanding of her characters and what their drive was. I wasn’t surprised about LuAnn falling into a submissive role so easily, it was the time and women were meant to be so innocent and naive to the way men’s inner musings worked. And she was always hungry for love see didn’t really receive from her own father. A common thread among these submissive types of characters. But Brad surprised me. He was antiauthority and devil may care, yet he had a preference for dominance and it was something he had played at with previous girlfriends. I thought someone like his brother Brian who is straight laced would fit that role more. But the level of his feelings of protection, attraction and affection for LuAnn were far surpassed by anything he was even aware he could have. I think they both had an awakening in the very short amount of time they spent together. I mean, that first spanking happened on her first night in his care. This story was good, I didn’t really feel like it had a “ick” factor at all. He liked her innocence, but that was truly part of her personality. He loved her body, which was of a grown woman, not some child. I felt like everything was completely consensual. She freely gave into his control and she loved it. And I think I felt this way because this story had an almost clinical approach to the writing style. It wasn’t formal, but the author really gets to the root of her characters desires and it made it feel more authentic and not played up like a typical smut story would have. It felt like it had more substance. I liked it.